Flameviper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[kung stick fighting]

maybe not the best you could have done

i'm sorry, this just isn't very good. i mean i'm sure you know this already, but it still needs to be said. i can see how you've got the beginning of something decent going here, and this isn't an awful movie for a learner, but i did not enjoy watching it very much. try using shape tweens between keyframes, they will work wonders for choppy movements and weird size changes as happen when you animate frame-to-frame. shape tweens are usually a bitch though, so maybe use different layers for different body parts. hard stuff, yes, but this is the road of a great animator that you have chosen to travel down.

ancioos1 responds:

i will try just you know my dad was gone for 1 day and i had to use that 12h

[Dad's at Work]

I laughed. I cried. I came.

This is truly the most GAR man I have ever had the pleasure of experiencing. Good work, chap.

[Phoenix Wrong:Say What!?]

Failbomb!

You somehow felt it necessary to scale the entire thing up to 550x400, thus lagging my browser and making the graphics looked like shit. Your audio clips were semi-chucklous at best, not to mention this concept has been done into the cold, dead ground.

[Yotsubato!]

WHAT

The lines were all right, but the voices made me want to kill myself.

[Rig Caramel Dansen]

Gee whiz.

Looks to me like you're trying to cover your ass. And this is one of those things which I don't enjoy too much.

But whatever.

Keveta2 responds:

wut? lol

[Azumanga-Stuff]

I FUCKING LOL'D

GOOD WORK SON.

GOOD WORK

[Azumanga - Rockstars]

lol tiny fingers

Minor stuff like that has a big impact on the image of a flash. But hey, it was better than a DDoS to the balls so I'm not complaining.

[Naruto Daioh]

Good animation, very nice.

however you forgot that the Naruto franchise is a gigantic steaming pile of fail, so of course the context downgrades your final judgment. But other than that it was good, so meh.

[Bones]

I lol'd.

XD

I'm an awful human being.

[Stick Fight V]

Fuck yes! You are the best Pokemon ever!

How the hell do you make blood splatter look good, and not like a gigantic turd shooting out of a wound? I've never been able to do that...

MeltingCrust responds:

well, first you start out with a big blob, and in each frame erase a little blood off of the previous frame. This should give u the effect of the blood dissolving into the air.